nice story and great colors
The cartoon was well put together, it also set a really nice mood.
My only gripe would be the butterfly. He wasn't explained , or introduced anywhere before the capture, so its odd to see him save the day. Maybe if thats what he was only carrying, in his bag, then it couldve help, but there are obviously other things in the bag. So him coming out of it just came out of left field.
Still, all in all a very nice flash.