Thats one hell of a production...
you had detailed characters, and incredible sets
incredible sound music, and spot on voices.
But while the retelling of the same story was ok,
the dialogue wasn't particually interesting..
I believe you were going for humour, (a testiment to that would be the background sight gags)... Bu ultimately the humour aspect fell flat.. and my thoughts began wander...(thats a bad thing).. I'd suggest reworking the script.. tighting up the shots, and shorting the length time..
Mindchamber