Ahh man!! Come on!!
Finish this!!! I need to see the ending!!
this is Killin me!!!!
Seriously.. I really love your story telling..
Yoy have truely insired me with this..
thanks
Mindchamber
Ahh man!! Come on!!
Finish this!!! I need to see the ending!!
this is Killin me!!!!
Seriously.. I really love your story telling..
Yoy have truely insired me with this..
thanks
Mindchamber
Thats one hell of a production...
you had detailed characters, and incredible sets
incredible sound music, and spot on voices.
But while the retelling of the same story was ok,
the dialogue wasn't particually interesting..
I believe you were going for humour, (a testiment to that would be the background sight gags)... Bu ultimately the humour aspect fell flat.. and my thoughts began wander...(thats a bad thing).. I'd suggest reworking the script.. tighting up the shots, and shorting the length time..
Mindchamber
nice job
I would have given higher point is you created your own textures.. but I do believe they are from a certain game.. good movement..
but I'd need to see the rest to further comment..
good luck
wow this was exceptional
The direction and pacing in this is really good,
nice job on that.. I loved the whole thing.
My only suggestion would have been with the scene when he first wakes up.. yo should hold off on the Zombie, and let the audience think he woke up from a dream... then BAm..hit them with the Zombie..
otherwise I loved it all!!
great job..
Thanks man good comment.
I thought it would be best this way to make the audience believe even more that it was all a dream at the second room scene. Thanks for the input
Great Job man!
That was Really Funny
and intricate... I really loved how you spoof the process of Klaymation
Funny stuff
You can tell it was alot of work.. But the payoff was well worth it.
haha thanks! the rope was the most fustrating part...i ended up using dental flaws and putting brown clay over it..and super gluing it to the wall..haha...PAIN..the smallest parts of klaymation are always the hardest..hehe...thanks for the review!
Absolutely Flawless
Impeccable piece of cinema my friend..
great characters and pacing. that was truelly a joy to watch.. and incredibly insprational..
cannot wait to see more from you..
best,
Mindchamber
Gosh!!
I can't believe how cool that was..
Considering how limited those sprites are,You emulated that scene perfectly!!
Every moment I watch I would wonder how you tackled the next scene, and I wasn't dissapointed!!
the mario sounds where great. and the points coming up from the luigis was an excellent touch!!
great job man!
Nice job Luis!!
Nice pacing and Direction there m'man!!
the room rotations where extra sweet!!..
the ending was kinda short, but thats because the flash had me wanting more!!!
great job man..
Mindchamber
This is excellent!
The Voices, character development and storylines are all excellent..
and your timing and animation is improving with each episode..
This was alot of fun to watch.
and I cant wait for the next episode
congrats!
Mindchamber
"If reality is dependent on what each person perceives it to be,Then reality as a collective does not exist."~MindChamber
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