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[Hunting to Piconjo]

nice work man

I loved your movement and style.

ending kinda trailed off, but who cares? this was action at it finest.

Hulalaoo responds:

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[The Last Fight: Final Ep]

not bad

for the most part I Iiked it. just remember its all about the story.. make sure your story is compelling enough to work as an animation, and if the story is weak then the animation needs to be intensified to hold up against a non existent story.

Also Ive always been a fan of a ruff styled animation in favor of a polished one simply because you can see how the animator thinks through them.. But for the ruff style you used here there should've been way more animation. theres just too many sliding still shots for this style to work.

anyways you are getting better it and the cartoon was fun, so keep it up

keepwalking responds:

yes, as many pointed out, I sort of missunderstood the timing and "style" of fights, they are verry quick, and they usually display intense achrobatics that almost redefine the laws of physic. Of course that means adding three times the amount of fbf I used, but I guess that makes the difference. I will think about remaking this movie, or starting with another one...

Thanks a lot for your review, it means a lot that such a legend comented about my movie :P

[Suramongo]

interesting flash.

Its obvious by the amount of frame work and background art work. you put a respectable amount of time into this work.

Whats not respectable, however is the fact that you dont acknowledge the and credit the multiple anime scenes you based your movements on.

Granted you do learn to better animate but studying the works of those better than you. but remember, there was an animator that created that complex style of movements you just plagiarized, he deserves the same amount of respect for his work as you do yours.

reference the animes you timed your movements off, and please don't rotoscope movements from any other sources other than your own.

your fancy explanation as you why you plagiarized other peoples work wont help you become a better animator in the long run.

[Cranes]

great style and atmoosphere

liked the style, pacing and just overall feeling of this piece.. but come on, ya getting really work out the story first, otherwise its nothing more than a tech demo.

redminus responds:

AGREED.

This was for a critical theory course where in context it actually made sense as a narrative, but yeah outside of that with no real backing it's kind of bereft of any significance whatsoever. I wanted to work out the story more (and still may) but I have some other things to finish first.

Holy crap thanks for reviewing though~!

[jumping turtles]

nice job

this is really well done. great timing,effects and feel.

personally I think this is the best animation done in this method to date.

keep it up man

turtleco responds:

if you like it, starogre told me of this guy named William Kentridge, who is supposedly the father of this kind of style of stop motion. Just watch out for the tributes, they aren't nearly as good.

anyway, glad you think so greatly of my movie.

[Stenchu Stealth Shinobi 2]

you really busted your ass on this one.

and the improvement shows.
the death with the guy sitting by the window was my favorite part, lol

congrats.

Rikimaru-Azlar responds:

Thanks alot MindChamber, I really appreciate it. :) Keep up the good work dude, I'll keep my eye out for your PBot project

[Mortal Kombat People II]

haha good times.

Its fine to see these nifty lil throwbacks to the good ol 90s

DiegoNOX responds:

haha

thanks