loved the animation
you have great timing, and I love all the little effects.
I think its time to bite the bullet and move on from stick figures.
loved the animation
you have great timing, and I love all the little effects.
I think its time to bite the bullet and move on from stick figures.
great premise
Its a cool idea, and great premise for a series of funny short.
I just think the jokes themselves, need to be alot snappier. This flash could been half as long, with all the material in tact, and it would came off as twice as funny. I guess Im saying is learn your beats.
on top of that, the quicker pace wouldve covered up that slide show you had going there towards the end.
Im looking forward to seeing more tho, good work
I take your point MindChamber.
I'm still a bit cautious with the pacing.
Creepy and weird
very atmospheric. ending felt like a bit of a cop out, but I loved the mood just the same.
amazing work
great style and timing. would love to see this finished one day.
I liked it.
nice well thought out piece, with good pacing and buildup. it was refreshing to see something other than gamertonight out of you. which was seriously starting to grate on me.
cool choice of music. and the monster was well animated. But that run cycle was pretty awful. I know run cycles are tuff (hell Im always battling them.) but its time to go back and study some poses there, and maybe watch some movie clips of people running in slow motion.
aside from that, it was a really cool piece.
I was never happy with the running cycle after I cleaned it up, but I was really short on time for that point. So I can't disagree with you there.
Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
haha awesome fight scene.
really man, nice timing there, and great subtle effects.
Gold's voice sadly is super painfull to listen to. Thankfully that didnt take away form the action or the humor in this piece.
well done man seriously.
Thanks. I appreciate it. It's tough finding good audio and voices, maybe it's just not my thing. Or I just need to work at it. I never really actually knew how Flecko's voice would sound, either. Its all just been speech bubbles until I got into flash. Ha!
Thanks for the review.
-Flecko-
haha so great
very nice man, Im really digging your work,
Nice flash
great voice acting, decent detail,
overall a decent piece.
All true. I appreciate the review. Will have to remember to clean up the art. More tweened pieces do need to be more polished.
Also excellent point about the contraption. Actually, it originally wasn't there. Perhaps it was a poor decision on my part to add it. Hmm...
And the great voice acting is all to the credit of Tomar. That guy has to do less redoes than any other VA I've seen on the web so far. Perhaps why he's used so much. Got it perfect almost every time. Was a pleasure to work with him.
"If reality is dependent on what each person perceives it to be,Then reality as a collective does not exist."~MindChamber
"Do not be defined by your conditioning, Otherwise the rest of the world will define your path."~IntraFace
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School Of Visual Arts
Allentown PA
Joined on 6/20/00