great premise
Its a cool idea, and great premise for a series of funny short.
I just think the jokes themselves, need to be alot snappier. This flash could been half as long, with all the material in tact, and it would came off as twice as funny. I guess Im saying is learn your beats.
on top of that, the quicker pace wouldve covered up that slide show you had going there towards the end.
Im looking forward to seeing more tho, good work