I liked it.
nice well thought out piece, with good pacing and buildup. it was refreshing to see something other than gamertonight out of you. which was seriously starting to grate on me.
cool choice of music. and the monster was well animated. But that run cycle was pretty awful. I know run cycles are tuff (hell Im always battling them.) but its time to go back and study some poses there, and maybe watch some movie clips of people running in slow motion.
aside from that, it was a really cool piece.